A project for university, in the module “Deconstructing Narrative”, in which we were tasked to create a short film which used a non-linear (or, more accurately; alternatively linear) structure. After some discussions within the group, I stuck myself on the idea of the letter and how you’ll read it as something in the present, but it’ll actually represents the actions and thoughts of the past. No one knows what could happen from the moment you drop your letter in that box until the moment the postman drops it off at its destination. What used to be your future is now your past, and it may be a much happier past than you envisaged, or it may be much, much darker.
It’s obviously not a perfect film. I would have loved for the main actor to be dressed a little less modernly, as she is quite an old-fashioned girl.
Ideally, we would have filmed the two interior scenes at different days so we could prepare and play off the footage of one phone conversation to the one acting in the other, that way they would have syncronised a lot better.
Issues with the camera led to us using 4:3 rather than widescreen. As it turns out, it works relatively well, but I would have liked it to have that full wide format, because we would have had more space for each shot.
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wow! i must admit that I expected a shitty something but I really liked it and would definitely be interested in watching so more short films like this one. i completely understand you’r point on the main actor’s outfit, but that’s exactly the way I picture girls that think they can meet the love of their life on facebook
interesting idea, though the ending kinda sucks (the brunette is going to meet same facebook guy…)
i’m no expert anyway …
cheers and good luck
Thanks a lot Willo. ^_^
The idea of the character was that she was new to the whole internet thing and lived in a naïve world where people like Mister Darcy exist. With that in mind, her clothes are a bit… wrong.
The ending is kept open. It COULD be the same guy. You never know! All you know is that the conversation sounds the same on their end. ^_^
I am a person like mister Darcy. Any girls who’d like to go out with me? Facebook me!
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